I have read it
and it is AMMMAAZZIINNGG
but my friend thought it was rubbish
. It was a very cool concept of the story, and I found it quite facinating
but it was kinda not fitting the MLP:FiM universe
. But I loved it, don't get me wrong you're brilliant for ideas. Also, please can I use this for one of my videos on my YouTube channel? I promise that I will give you credit and I will support your ideas in any way
but if people hate it I will get very angry
not at you, but at them. Anyways, thanks for making it and please, oh please for my life, please reply.