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July 08, 2013, 12:32:57 AM
First, I would like to state that this is a place open for anyone to post their respective poetry aswell, but I wanted to get the ball Rollin, so here's what I got going for me.
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I seperate them by currency symbols...
Poems:

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« Last Edit: August 08, 2013, 02:14:55 PM by Edge Maverick »
"if all the stars in the sky are my enemy,
May they know that they are still not worthy opponents."

July 08, 2013, 01:12:36 PM
Reply #1
Edge,these are all truely beautiful. :heart:

July 09, 2013, 08:30:14 PM
Reply #2
Edge,these are all truely beautiful. :heart:

Thank you, I'm glad I have a fan.   :D
"if all the stars in the sky are my enemy,
May they know that they are still not worthy opponents."

July 10, 2013, 11:07:33 AM
Reply #3
Awesome, I don't see how people can be so creative. Maybe I just don't try hard enough :-\

Anyway I made this one:

Haiku's are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
REFRIGERATOR
I totally did not steal this :ajliar
"The answer, always, is the Wolves of Fenris, because they are clinically insane."
-Lunar Wolves Captain Torgaddon on the subject of the toughest Space Marine Legion.

"Bribery and threats are always popular, but generally avoided, especially if you're likely to attract inquisitorial attention as they're better at both and tend to resent other people resorting to their methods."
-Commissar Ciaphas Cain on winning over Tribunals.

I've been brainwashed so many times there is nothing left in here but soap suds

July 11, 2013, 01:40:50 PM
Reply #4

July 12, 2013, 01:51:09 AM
Reply #5
I'm on my blackberry so I only saw the last one, but still, it was lovely! You're talented Edge, it's beautiful! I will certainly read the other ones once I'm back at my place!
« Last Edit: July 12, 2013, 01:52:00 AM by PokePony »
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Red for the bloodshed and struggle for freedom.
Blue for the Indian Ocean, in the middle of which Mauritius is situated.
Yellow for the new light of independence shining over the island.
Green for its lush vegetation and its colour throughout the year.

July 12, 2013, 11:34:25 PM
Reply #6
I'm on my blackberry so I only saw the last one, but still, it was lovely! You're talented Edge, it's beautiful! I will certainly read the other ones once I'm back at my place!

Why thank you, I hope to hear your opinion on the rest.
"if all the stars in the sky are my enemy,
May they know that they are still not worthy opponents."

July 16, 2013, 09:30:13 AM
Reply #7
You are quite the poet, Mr. Maverick. :)

If I may also add one of my own poems:

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Not my best work, but I came up with it at 7:30 AM. So... :P

Edit: I came up with another poem. Last one for now, don't wanna steal this thread from Edge. :-X

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« Last Edit: July 16, 2013, 09:36:24 AM by Rainbow Dash's Husband, 007 »

July 16, 2013, 10:17:16 PM
Reply #8
You are quite the poet, Mr. Maverick. :)

If I may also add one of my own poems:

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Not my best work, but I came up with it at 7:30 AM. So... :P

Edit: I came up with another poem. Last one for now, don't wanna steal this thread from Edge. :-X

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Vynil I guess. But you can post as much as you want, this is a place for all poetry. I just started it by posting mine.
"if all the stars in the sky are my enemy,
May they know that they are still not worthy opponents."

July 16, 2013, 10:18:29 PM
Reply #9
Vynil I guess. But you can post as much as you want, this is a place for all poetry. I just started it by posting mine.

*Gives Edge a cookie*

Ah, alright. I often write poems, so I have a feeling I'll post here a lot. :)

July 17, 2013, 06:16:04 PM
Reply #10
*Gives Edge a cookie*

Ah, alright. I often write poems, so I have a feeling I'll post here a lot. :)

Well I hope to see more.
"if all the stars in the sky are my enemy,
May they know that they are still not worthy opponents."

July 28, 2013, 01:32:42 PM
Reply #11

Your works of art are simply stunning,
laced with love from lips so cunning.
So here I give you my commendation,
for making us smile from such creations.

So unto this, a merry start.
And pray the world shant tear apart,
a lovely frame of mind as yours.
For all here give you our support.

Adios, Adieu.
Until we meet again.
I cannot wait to see more my friend.

/color]


In other words. I think your poetry is wonderfully written.
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July 28, 2013, 02:01:53 PM
Reply #12

Your works of art are simply stunning,
laced with love from lips so cunning.
So here I give you my commendation,
for making us smile from such creations.

So unto this, a merry start.
And pray the world shant tear apart,
a lovely frame of mind as yours.
For all here give you our support.

Adios, Adieu.
Until we meet again.
I cannot wait to see more my friend.

/color]


In other words. I think your poetry is wonderfully written.

My repatriere upon this location,
Although it be bold,
Is the greatest sign of motivation,

To you I must thank,
For giving me so many good things,
All just to store in my memory bank,

A wonderful time,
And a studious offer,
With a small little chime,
It's ideals we're both after,

So next we should dance,
Upon winds so divine,
Before it all melts away,
Like snow on a pine.


(In other words, thank you, for more than just that poem.)
"if all the stars in the sky are my enemy,
May they know that they are still not worthy opponents."

July 28, 2013, 05:28:44 PM
Reply #13
My repatriere upon this location,
Although it be bold,
Is the greatest sign of motivation,

To you I must thank,
For giving me so many good things,
All just to store in my memory bank,

A wonderful time,
And a studious offer,
With a small little chime,
It's ideals we're both after,

So next we should dance,
Upon winds so divine,
Before it all melts away,
Like snow on a pine.


(In other words, thank you, for more than just that poem.)




Im always here to lend a hand,
or be there when you need a friend.
A shoulder to cry on, I'll offer my ear,
and provide the shelter until your storms clear.

For a true friend is honest; no lies I have spake.
And a true friend I'll be, even when this world breaks.

Tis a silly, whimsical thing.
But I'd share all I had if happiness it did bring.
[/size]

(Thank you. I'm glad to be you're friend. And now that you've got me, yer stuck with me. )




Silly willy nilly be,
Something wicked laughs at me.
And through the shadows of the trees,
I see that carnal smile of glee.
So quickened heart and much despair,
I flee the place of fear and scare.

But hushed much like a lullaby,
It calls to me.
Do not cry. Do not fear, for in time things shall clear. Close your eyes, let me in, I can make your world spin.
LIES!
Cried into the the darkest night.
LIES! You know not of my might!

But heedless of words, the danger drew closer.
In ominous form, it cracks the composure.
Seeping in, melting your very soul.
A scream in the dark, you've lost all control.

Wake up. Reality gleams.
Short quick breaths. Twas only a dream.


(Short little ditty about a child's nightmare.)
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July 28, 2013, 07:40:06 PM
Reply #14



Im always here to lend a hand,
or be there when you need a friend.
A shoulder to cry on, I'll offer my ear,
and provide the shelter until your storms clear.

For a true friend is honest; no lies I have spake.
And a true friend I'll be, even when this world breaks.

Tis a silly, whimsical thing.
But I'd share all I had if happiness it did bring.
[/size]

(Thank you. I'm glad to be you're friend. And now that you've got me, yer stuck with me. )




Silly willy nilly be,
Something wicked laughs at me.
And through the shadows of the trees,
I see that carnal smile of glee.
So quickened heart and much despair,
I flee the place of fear and scare.

But hushed much like a lullaby,
It calls to me.
Do not cry. Do not fear, for in time things shall clear. Close your eyes, let me in, I can make your world spin.
LIES!
Cried into the the darkest night.
LIES! You know not of my might!

But heedless of words, the danger drew closer.
In ominous form, it cracks the composure.
Seeping in, melting your very soul.
A scream in the dark, you've lost all control.

Wake up. Reality gleams.
Short quick breaths. Twas only a dream.


(Short little ditty about a child's nightmare.)

That second one was.... Wow...
"if all the stars in the sky are my enemy,
May they know that they are still not worthy opponents."

July 28, 2013, 08:28:30 PM
Reply #15
That second one was.... Wow...

:-X So I take it you liked it?
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July 28, 2013, 08:48:25 PM
Reply #16
"if all the stars in the sky are my enemy,
May they know that they are still not worthy opponents."

July 29, 2013, 12:32:25 AM
Reply #17
It was magnificent!

Thank you so much! It means alot for another writer to say that. Especially with your skill at poetry.
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August 02, 2013, 02:09:51 PM
Reply #18
There's a boy who sends me love
He writes it in a letter
It's sealed with a crimson dove
Wishing that I love forever

But he knows my heart is fragile
It's been hurt so many times
Broken glass that sat a while
And the pieces I cant find

So I painfully consider
Though this boy is much a man
One may call me such a sinner
Planting kisses on my hand

His heart is made of diamonds
And his hair of lace and gold
And his voice brings me to silence
Yet my heart he yearns to hold




A song that I made up last night in the form of a poem.
Sometimes I'm incredibly soppy.
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August 02, 2013, 02:30:38 PM
Reply #19
There's a boy who sends me love
He writes it in a letter
It's sealed with a crimson dove
Wishing that I love forever

But he knows my heart is fragile
It's been hurt so many times
Broken glass that sat a while
And the pieces I cant find

So I painfully consider
Though this boy is much a man
One may call me such a sinner
Planting kisses on my hand

His heart is made of diamonds
And his hair of lace and gold
And his voice brings me to silence
Yet my heart he yearns to hold




A song that I made up last night in the form of a poem.
Sometimes I'm incredibly sappy.

That was beautiful...
"if all the stars in the sky are my enemy,
May they know that they are still not worthy opponents."

August 02, 2013, 04:52:09 PM
Reply #20
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August 02, 2013, 07:12:40 PM
Reply #21
Stopping along a road to nowhere,
the door hits shut, as I waltz inside.
I get a list of meals and drinks,
as I stare out at the tide.

Two men walk in,
their jaws clattering.
Their words enrage me,
until my teeth start chattering.

I don't remember what they said.
All I know is that they filled me with such hatred.

I get my coffee, steaming hot,
while the others there nod.
I get thoughts that I should not,
But my brain stays in wrong.

I stand up, in open defiance.
Their eyes widen.
The others stare at me.

And then they laugh.
my rage peaks,
they think it chaff.
I'll show them.

I'll show them all.
Hot liquid burns,
This is banal.

He squirms on the ground,
writhing in pain.
The coffee drips,
and infects his brain.

Hatred, vile, pathetic rot.
He put up his dukes,
as did the whole lot.

I see what I've done,
I catch my breath.
I have to run.
For all that's left.

Getting back on the road to nowhere,
the door slams shut, as I run outside.
I get in the car, engines and keys,
and I stare out at the tide.

August 02, 2013, 08:06:32 PM
Reply #22
That was great, although it seems unlike you.
"if all the stars in the sky are my enemy,
May they know that they are still not worthy opponents."

August 02, 2013, 09:57:58 PM
Reply #23
Don't worry, that wasn't an actual series of events!

I was just writing up poetry. The intention was to get your brain somewhat into a fight-or-flight type of thing, with the way the main characters' rage is depicted, and suddenly bring you back down into calm.

I am glad you liked it though!

August 03, 2013, 04:43:47 PM
Reply #24
That was very well written Jade! It felt all too real. That's a good sign in a poet/writer. :}
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